The Time ticks and the bell rang
There comes a hand pushing papers on my desk
my mind is clean as an young born child
I close my eyes and pray to god
"take me through with the hurdle before me "
The time ticks on and bell rigs
I hear the tearing of papers ...
and see every one is in hurry to go on the conquest
to capture the beast
and claim their victory
The time ticks on and on
I see the first problem before me ...
something seems to be wrong ..
I haven't got the question ..
I read and re-read the question
The time ticks on and on
" Nope there goes a question above my head ... " I think
Fear start running through my spine
I close my eyes again to regain the lost confidence
I say to my self " ..lets try the next question"
The time ticks on and on
Question after Question seems to be in alien script
I start wondering have I got the wrong paper
I look around to get the feel
People cry .."additional sir"
The time ticks on and on
I try my futile attempts to work something on paper ...
I feel the time has stopped and
people around me are busy jutting down their solutions
I decide to relay on my only last option
The time ticks on and on
There come a caution of last 15 mins
I poke my fellow stud at front to get some clue
teacher catches and warning are passed...
there is nothing i can do now
the time ticks on and on ...
I peep out of the window at the free bird
wonder why can't I be like it...
I feel dejected about the hard work i kept on the subject ...
I look around for the last call waiting like person who's death is fixed
The time ticks and the bell ring ...
The same hand come this time to snatch the empty paper from me
I pack my stuff and run through the door like mad rhino
everyone discusses about the problem and marks
I sit down to write this poem
Saturday, April 19, 2008
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4 comments:
......not timid....cautious.
Wow Cool man .... I liked d concept very well and especially the flow is awesome ... one suggestion add more rhyming words when u write poems like this ..[;)]
Go go go Sastry ..
way to go, maama.
Its a beauty which shows every students life
roomie
Its pretty good !!! ....yet some more points to be hit to make it look like a poem.....they could be
1.Put rhymes as many as possible
2.Use atleast two lines for repetition through out the poem
All in all its superb...great going...keep it up!!
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